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Thursday, October 1, 2009

October 1st


Minuscule drops descend,
An ephemeral coat they portend.

Chilly winds besiege,
An unfelt yearning they release.

They wander along with me a while,
Why I ask..

To remind what you need,
they say,
For You are not complete.

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for a beautiful day....


7 comments:

Neha said...

Beautiful thot expressed beautifully.. one of d most memorable day...!! thanks :)

Anonymous said...

ya dude., we all ll do it again ;)

Amber Light said...

Lovely string of words. But I guess only the ones who were in it together on October 1st would know? Because I feel I am missing what you want to convey

Tripthi Battapadi said...

beautiful!

nanda said...

@ neha & anon- my pleasure :)

@amber:thanks, and hmmm, you just had to be out to enjoy the weather.. but guess you do not prefer such 'grey' days :D

@periwinkle: thanks :)

Meghana Naidu said...

i <3 the visual structure you've maintained!
it's a lot of fun to write that way
and hell tough

;)

Amrutha said...

LOVE this one